Apprehensive_Fly
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Greetings, Everyflies! My name is Apprehensive_Fly, but you can call me 'Anne'. Anne is from my actual name, Anne de Biville. I write here, but my main writing platform is Ritoria. Check it out
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Apprehensive_Fly3 years agoCommentedOh-uh, first chapter and it already has issues. Sigh
- Apprehensive_Fly3 years agoPosted
Hey there, i just wanna say, before you upload any works in a writing website, please keep in mind to actually plan your work well. I found the story boring, and the writing seems.. off. Please also remember that you have readers to impress. One of them is me, extremely disappointed. Hope sometime you improve, so i can read this thing with no issues. Actually, it has potential. Please, improve.