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Cole_Bromley12hCommentedCh 90 Chapter 90- Cole_Bromley2dCommentedCh 89 Chapter 89
- Cole_Bromley3dCommentedAnd before anyone starts spouting some "Webnovel is superior" bullshit or whatever, just know that I value the opinion of the hobo that lives behind the bar I work at more than the opinion of some strangers on the internet. I'm giving the courtesy of explaining my reasoning and warning my readers, don't be the reason I do it because there are more "Webnovel is superior" people than people saying "Watt pad is superior." Most of us there know it's trash, admit it's trash, and revel in the trash like fat raccoons.
- Cole_Bromley4dCommentedCh 88 Chapter 88
- Cole_Bromley5dCommentedCh 69 Bullying here, bullying there, bullying is everywhere *
- Cole_Bromley6dPosted
couldn't finish it. I got about 130 ish chapters in, but the characters just killed it for me. I get with the whole multiverse that there are infinite variations of the same characters, BUT that doesn't explain how well-known characters act completely nonsensical. this is by far my main issue with the story. the arc with Jean Grey was just painful and had me grimacing. it should be mentioned that the plot armor is very strong with this one, like vibranium could be broken if he sneezed. it's a fun story if you want a mind-numbing read. the gold finger is interesting, and the early story is great. overall, it's not bed but has some major 6 if those don't really bug you, you'll really enjoy it. the interactions between the twins and mc were cute, but girls won't fall in love with a man because he is handsome the same way a man will fall in love with a girl because she is beautiful. it's a solid mixed bag. Some great stuff, some really bad. I'd say it's worth at least reading the beginning WW2 arc
- Cole_Bromley6dReplied to Ronin46'Ah, Diana, what an excellent woman, but sadly, someone else got there first.'
- Cole_Bromley6dCommented
so long as a tropes isn't done badly it's just a plot divice. Don't avoid them too much. people like them for a reason, just make sure they fit well. in the more recent chapters, your writing has gotten much more flowery with more intense descriptions. it's not bad, but it's a little overdone at times. my biggest advice is to just keep it consistent. Bouncing between flowery and spartan makes it tough to keep the immersion. overall, though, the story is well planned. you can see where the big baddie is, and nothing really snuck up out of the blue. I look forward to seeing how you'll rework it!
Ch 224 Announcement - Cole_Bromley11dCommented
there is nothing for him to read, he didn't have a book in the supplies given to him. or is the AI just trickle feeding him information?
Ben keep reading and then learn about his Sun Dragon Slayer Magic. Usually a Dragon slayer will get their magic bestowed upon them by a Dragon. However, Ben's Dragon Slayer Magic was granted by Gods using a dead Dragon's power. So it can be said that he received it from a real dragon, through the Gods. - Cole_Bromley11dCommentedCh 24 Making some 'Friends'
- Cole_Bromley11dCommented
I've really enjoyed the story over the last 3 days as I binged it. I'm confused about the beginning. there was the kid in the woods that was brought to Styles' dad by the trucker. what happened to him? is he supposed to be Tristan? it seemed like a naked boy was introduced and dropped off at the sheriff's station, and then it cut to Trist and Malia in the woods. so is there a second vampire running around or an abandoned plot point or something like that? Anyways it's been a great read. you've got some really convincing characters and great story planning.
Ch 201 CHAPTER 197 - Cole_Bromley12dCommentedCh 23 Uzumaki Naruto vs Uchiha Sasuke
- Cole_Bromley12dCommentedCh 84 Chapter 84
- Cole_Bromley14dReplied to BalladIt was as if they came to a tacit understanding about how to address each other. The two girls with them only cringed as they suddenly realized that the two of them were more alike than they assumed, especially Allison.
- Cole_Bromley14dCommentedScott wondered if Stiles would be of any use if Derek came on their ass but decided not to say it.
- Cole_Bromley14dCommentedCh 21 Introductions
- Cole_Bromley16dCommentedCh 136 Chapter 135
- Cole_Bromley16dReplied to SeniorSereneLotus
was thinking of the wrong character😂 you are correct nawaki was around that age in cannon but I made him older
"I am Senju Nawaki, Elite Konohagakure Jonin sent to escort any Uzumaki refugees to our village." - Cole_Bromley16dCommentedCh 81 Chapter 81
- Cole_Bromley18dReplied to Rigchel
he shot one with the arrow earlier, that shot was the one that made the group of 5 scatter
My eyes sprung open, once more as air realized I was in one of the Big House beds probably at the Medical wing if the bandages around my gut and torso were anything to go by. With my new 'sight' I didn't even need to get off the bed, thank god, to 'see' what was around me there seemed to be 3 other people in here with one of them being the Hunter I had pierced straight through the gut.