I hate stories that go onto to much detail or use multiple unconventional words to describe a scene just for word count. All that does is cause people to lose interest in the story cause it takes forever to describe one attack or action. sorry but deleting this from my library

I hate when chapters repeat. if it happens again I will drop the book

love the story so far it's great that you don't go overboard with the details I hate books that into too much detail

so far I like the story but it is a bit slow and the long rambling explanations are a bit annoying

ok I have been trying to look past all the long winded explanations because I like the story but I can no longer ignore them when it takes 10 chapters to finish 1 fight. I will no longer read this story as it is a waste of my time and money

getting tired of the long rambling thoughts and explanations. taking over half a chapter to make 1 simple decision is a waste of your time and ours.

getting tired of the long rambling thoughts and explanations. taking over half a chapter to make 1 simple decision is a waste of your time and ours.

why post the same chapter twice? I don't like being ripped off. if this happens again I will not continue reading this book.