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And with tenderness I looked at the books on the shelves, only they remained my friends.
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Most importantly, I can say that I started the story well. Good job. Keep up the good work. The description is done in the same spirit, easy to read. And also there are some points where u are using 3 point view and and then moving to first one. But you skipped the few introductory chapters how it started. So It was a sudden scenario
I've read the first chapter. I want to note that I haven't read a story related to wolves before, but the beginning is intriguing. Of course, several characters flooded into my head at once, but that's fine, I just won't have time to remember everything. Since I read with translation, I'm not doing so well with English, but after reading the first chapter, I liked the narration. Also, the behavior of Julis, who appeared first in the beginning, is unusual. He seems to be the type of person who is more playful, and if he is bored with something, then he can become insane. I would note one more thing, that Lily, I think her name was, who introduced him as a demon, that was the interesting part. If the story is about wolves, then why mention a demon, it makes you wonder, and read on. In addition, I also liked the way you describe the characters. Their appearance, the aura they create, and so on. That's all I can say after reading the first chapter. But as soon as I read the rest, about tomorrow, since I have things to do, I will give feedback.
I mean, is it some kinda choice of a God? since your name "TheMILF_Hero" suits to this character...
Physically 19, but mentally 24