cool

the story is very unfocused

cool

what happens when a world dies of old age? and what do they do about the lifespan of the sun?

it zucks that if you don't have innate talent in can't really get anywhere in life.

hope the abomination slime doesn't eat Edriels body.

there's the potential he wants her have free will, mind reading will take that away essentially turning her into a puppet, pull the correct strings and get the reaction you desire. Relationships are supposed to be unpredictable in that way.

This story has a lot of potential but feels rushed.

this is rlly nice

I'm happy you're releasing more chapters .

May I suggest some BOOOOOM.

I like this character progression ads alot more depth.

When I asked if the moon could have alien life I didn't expect it to happen it's a wish come true lol.

I, not to sure what it is but I think this story needs something else. 🤔

i love this.

cool I thought you were dead I've had this happen alot with other novel's.

c:

when is she gonna use her devour skill more?

yay thanks for the new chapters.

I hunger