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Yashasvi_Bansode18dCommented*Beginning
The Begenning of the End #81- Yashasvi_Bansode18dCommented
Just the Indians, Mongols, Russians will be an almost insurmountable challenge and can stop all of this right in Asia
Although Kung Fu may not be practised like it is in China, I was sure that there would be powerhouses around the world. Of course, they wouldn't be able to match me but they won't be pushovers. - Yashasvi_Bansode1mthCommented
what's happened why has micah suddenly become so...flashy. I mean he's always grinning or coming up with quips and trying to be funny. Not that much of a problem but having a character always be in such flavor is getting on my nerves a bit. Just my two cents.
Ch 60 Yolanda Montez #60 - Yashasvi_Bansode2mthCommented
If you're taking suggestions, make it so that, a ritual which is complete antithesis of all the concepts that make up that god can hurt the god if done correctly, and if it is powered with something strong enough it can kill the god as well. For example Mother box, fate helmet, mobius chair,speed force, magic or sacrifice of large amount of life.
Ch 27 Issue #26: X, Loss - Yashasvi_Bansode3mthCommented
Just name him Steve
~~~~(Point of view: Azrael Sanchez)~~~~ - Yashasvi_Bansode3mthCommented
The problem with this is the change in his mentality from a soldier to maybe a police officer for no reason at all. If he is a soldier then know that soldiers fight outsides not fight crime. This is the peak of idiocy if he knowing there are aliens still agrees to "Fight Crime".
Ch 3 Chapter 3: This is Holy Terra? - Yashasvi_Bansode3mthCommentedCh 555 Demigod
- Yashasvi_Bansode4mthPosted
It started good , the background and all but past some chapter it just crashed. Every goddamned thing is about lifespan this , vitality that . Everybody strong wants lifespan and every formation eats lifespan. If every emperor had such methods why'd they die. No analytical thinking , no mystery the mc just accepts all things. All convenience could've just been used as good plot devices of fate plotting but the author is so retarded he makes it insufferable.
- Yashasvi_Bansode4mthCommentedCh 52 Westbound
- Yashasvi_Bansode4mthCommented
No one ever does.
The feeling of judgment. Of denial. he did not like it. - Yashasvi_Bansode5mthCommented
v(t)=3t^2+2t+1; x(t)=t^3+t^2+t ; putting t=2: x(2)=14 ; x(5)=155 x(5)-x(2)=141
[A 'Power Burst Monkey' activates its Racial Skill 'Qi Follow the Power' to move around the forest. Its speed to move from one tree to another is V(t) = 3t^2 + 2t + 1; if the Power Burst Monkey is at Tree B at t = 2 seconds, how far is it from Tree B at t = 5 seconds?] - Yashasvi_Bansode5mthCommentedCh 50 A Day of Preparation
- Yashasvi_Bansode6mthCommentedCh 49 A Call to Action (Final)
- Yashasvi_Bansode6mthCommentedCh 47 A Call to Action (Karag)
- Yashasvi_Bansode6mthCommentedCh 45 Autumn Cleaning
- Yashasvi_Bansode6mthCommented
Man not gonna lie, The story could do without this 1st chapter. I'd advise you to delete this chapter and just reference all this stuff as flashbacks or reminiscence from the mc. This one just takes you out of the story and breaks immersion.
This book has been deleted. - Yashasvi_Bansode6mthCommentedCh -1 Glossary