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I am liking the character of the female lead so far, she had a strong background story with the entire story pointing around her.
I find the novel going smoothly in a steady manner, its not a unique idea for a story to take since it is a common troupe from a FL loving the ML and they got together because of an arrange marriage. I read plenty about this genre. But nice take though, I just notice that you sometimes miss some articles in your sentences, but I enjoy it though. keep it up!
He sounded like an alien if you would look at it first, but latter you will realize that it was a cliché line for someone promising someone. Nice.
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