Damian_Anderson

Here I am again supporting my favorite author. Funny take for a typical LGBT story, I like it! Let's see how the character progresses. Good luck with your new novel author.

I am just reading the first chapter of the book with the character profile of the character as it is giving me the vibes of like a heavy series that revolves with supernatural, and what's good as I read the synopsis it also involves Gods which I look forward in reading to the succeeding chapters.

I am liking the character of the female lead so far, she had a strong background story with the entire story pointing around her.

I find the novel going smoothly in a steady manner, its not a unique idea for a story to take since it is a common troupe from a FL loving the ML and they got together because of an arrange marriage. I read plenty about this genre. But nice take though, I just notice that you sometimes miss some articles in your sentences, but I enjoy it though. keep it up!

He sounded like an alien if you would look at it first, but latter you will realize that it was a cliché line for someone promising someone. Nice.

Deep...

Cool story, it takes quite a character to have with personalities that is depicted closely enough with Romeo and Juliet but all in all you had quite a unique story.