Aureborn

Fragile Pride: You become more careless, almost thirst for sucess, and for every loss, you suffer a severe weakness.

Yo the author is using ai 😭😭

Ricochet from ULTRAKILL and Shivers from Disco Elysium?? The autor is a man of culture, i see

Well... I noticed your rush in the BG3 arc, but i didn't think it would lead to here so soon. You have a serious problems with powerscaling in every novel. Between the mid section to the last, you always tend to empower the MC too mucho, and every fight is a fight that he can finish in a matter of seconds. In the start, you write them smart and cunning, people that can bleed, but always tend to transform them in a god of slaugthering. Ight mate, see you in your next novel.

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Thanks for the chapter, and also for the extra 🎉

With him since 2022, great histories as always. Good character development, powerscaling and general plot, but tends to go in hiatus 😞. But as the good gambler that i am, i will still bet my powerstones on him

Why every novel with a female protagonist have yuri? I've seen all (hemafrodites, gays, trans, inter-especies), minus a straight female MC.

Thank you, already waiting for your next fic!

MC with a good power and not imediatly op, good character construction and development. Also, has some references sometimes, gaining a plus to the story. Just read it ma' Man, it's worth your shoot