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Corvus_Potter_37467mthCommentedAs a cultivation novel reader life and death situation are a necessity in this world as well as the ruthlessness of the main character. But the growth of the MC was an excellent pace. Do keep up the work👍🏻
6. Do you have any suggestions for improvements or elements you'd like to see explored in future volumes?- Corvus_Potter_37467mthCommented
As some one committed the vows and wanting to first marry his fiance is actually my favourite part. I will not be lying if I said that Surbhi and Aditya are My baised couple for this novel😅😅
5. What were your favorite moments or scenes in Volume 1? - Corvus_Potter_37467mthCommented
Naah everything thing was explained beautifully and with ample information. I whole heartedly support this story.
4. Were there any parts of the story that you felt were unclear or needed more detail? - Corvus_Potter_37467mthCommented
The entry of gods and sudden marriages where excellent surprises and the plot twist of Aunt marriage was interesting too. I love to read this novel till the end😊
3. Were there any plot twists or story elements that surprised you or left you wanting more explanation? - Corvus_Potter_37467mthCommented
I would like if the character sheet is added remebering all the characters is hectic if you understand what I mean😅😅 all the characters are excellent and as an Indian love this story and its's character.
2. Did the character development resonate with you? Were there specific characters you found particularly interesting or those you'd like to see more of in future volumes? - Corvus_Potter_37467mthCommented
Just the perfect Space I wanted.
1. How did you find the pacing of the story in Volume 1? Was it too fast, too slow, or just right? - Corvus_Potter_37461yrCommented
This type of fighting right[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
'I feel refreshed after battling in bed,' - Corvus_Potter_37461yrReplied to siniestracalceta
🤦🤦😑😑 What are kids doind here??😑
*Byuurr...Byuuruu....Byuurrr...* - Corvus_Potter_37461yrCommented
O dear, our CEO, only god (author) knows what is going to happen to him🤣😂🤣🤣
Old Man Xu just smiled cheerfully, ignoring Nathan's deathly glare. He even raised his two thumbs as support to Little Ethan's claim. - Corvus_Potter_37461yrReplied to Unmasked63
author, I think you are the real devil instead of the yandere.
'This is bad. I really like his face when he's sad~' The girl thinks with a huge creepy smile plastered on her face but when she thinks back to later in their conversation when he seemed overly smiley and friendly she frowns deeply, 'I don't like that pesky mask of his! Wait..... I DIDN'T EVEN GET HIS NAME!' She screamed inwardly. Putting his facade at the back of her mind, she slightly panics before looking up at the door with the number 03 on it, "Well it seems we'll be seeing a lot of each other. I've taken an interest in you, unlucky for you, neighbor." She whispers under her breath walking one door to the right opening the door with the number 04 on it going inside. - Corvus_Potter_37461yrReplied to Unmasked63
yes😁😁😈
The girls face slightly changed to a surprised one for a moment before changing into a scared one and finally into a wide smile that she showed to Kaden, "That's true, I guess I just have a strange sense of humor haha." The girl chuckled a little bit creeping Kaden out a little. - Corvus_Potter_37461yrReplied to GuardianofNightNyxThis paragraph has been deleted.
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what an act
"M-Mam! I am really sorry! I don't know h-how it happened!" - Corvus_Potter_37461yrCommented
I do not know author, whether I should laugh at mc's use of intelligence or cry at the Viscountess' naveity?🤣🤣🤣🤣😭😭😭😭
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damn it, what a predator.
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Smoothest line
"Ah, U-Um , S-Sorry, I-I am sorry. I-I just never saw someone as beautiful as you s-so I was lost…" He replied awkwardly with a slight blush on his face. - Corvus_Potter_37461yrReplied to Kw0z
For a gigolo, it ain't a bad thing
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Men of culture live to read this😁😁😈[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Tbh, it's a sin for cultured people to not read this novel. - Corvus_Potter_37461yrCommented
Is Agres a male or female?
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