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I'm with you craken
put it in me... not exactly sexy!
this doesn't read correctly, I recommend revising slightly
shouldn't this be two? above 4 bullies are mention, 2 of which are discussed. that should leave 2...
you don't use also in this context when speaking. use "too" it sounds much more natural
blew my mind also? who talks like that. it should be "you blew my mind too"
the language isn't clear in this paragraph and needs a rewrite.
the language isn't clear in this paragraph and needs a rewrite.