I wish to sincerely compliment the journey of improving your written language of English. Congratulations, keep improving and writing this enjoyable story.

Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, I believe that this story idea has not fully been explored. I think the Thrag should use this opportunity to devlop orchish culture and society with schools, currency and a more civilan lifestyle for a regular orc with orcish spin. If you want orcs to be seen as a still evil and only male race maybe make it so that orcs can breed with different races of women like from goblin slayer, maybe giving more incentive to go raiding to capture women for faster gestation time and or women having a litter than longer single breeding pod.