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AGENT_47

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2021-08-10 JoinedUnited States
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Commented

    Sandbagged again.

    "No! What am I thinking?! I can't go down this rabbit hole!"
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Commented

    *some children

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    Talismancer In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · The_Watchdog
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Commented

    *tents

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    Talismancer In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · The_Watchdog
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Commented

    *raise and open the book

    I walk out using my cane as a support with the book in my other hand. The ork turns and notices us it raises the bat in it's hand as a warning these things are smarter than the goblins. I rase and open the book as I speak into it a harsh grating voice comes out slightly delayed.
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    Talismancer In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · The_Watchdog
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Commented

    * from range with ease

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    Talismancer In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · The_Watchdog
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Posted

    This is a great novel and I truely think it has great potential but the only thing I have a mild problem with is the world development but it just started so not a big deal

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    Talismancer In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · The_Watchdog
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Replied to SKAHLY
    Ch 3 The First Battle
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    Talismancer In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · The_Watchdog
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Replied to slimeysocks12395

    Hmm... It's almost like i said that in the first chapers note

    Ch 7 Ch.07
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    Bleached Bones
    Fantasy · AGENT_47
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Replied to slimeysocks12395

    Nah, I just had a bad bout of writer's block

    Ch 13 Ch.013
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    Bleached Bones
    Fantasy · AGENT_47
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Replied to Fiearen

    mm

    The door, if you could call it that, is large enough to be a gate, plenty of room for the more bulky castes of ant to fit through, even so, it's a bit of a squeeze for me. I move slowly, not wanting to unnerve anyone on the other side. Having a giant pair of serrated mandibles poke through your door would be enough to upset most people.
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Posted

    This story is just starting out and it only has a few chapters but it's still a very good read the only problem i can think of is not enough world buolding

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    Assassin's Creed: Most Wanted
    Video Games · Temshop
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  • AGENT_47
    AGENT_472yr
    Replied to Mario_Orduno

    yeah man i try to update daily but i was so busy yesterday

    Ch 6 Ch.06
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    Bleached Bones
    Fantasy · AGENT_47
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