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Came back to try to keep I writingš«” hope u guys like it, if not then oh well š C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C
Fuck nah, Iām telling you. Drop the supernatural and powers shit and keep the story with the Mc being sent back to 1912. And how he would deal with everything that would go on in that time. Ur concepts are great even ur other fanfic but the way u try to add in all this other nonsense just fucks everything up.
Tbh kinda surprised that the story is going well, heās not op, doesnāt have a system, not chasing girls, and is actually trying to get stronger at a normal pace. Randomly found this and I kinda wanna see where this goes. I like it how he was dropped around the start of shippuden instead of years before naruto was even born because most fanfics that drop their Mc decades before the story starts never even get up to the start of canon before fuckin the whole plot up 8/10 for me š
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Iāve been trying to read it the past couple days but thereās like 7 chapters in revision. Why couldnāt I leave the old chapters and when youāre done, you switch it out for the new ones. I really like this fanfic concept but now Iām just getting frustrated looking everyday to see if u reuploaded the chapters š„²
Ay man itās all guud, ngl didnāt even see this till now. Just out of curiosity, are u stuck with how youāre going to play out the story or do u not have the time to try to come up wit a plot for this fanfic. Not trying to be rude or anything but I just wanna know ur thoughts if your going to continuing or not with this cuz I kinda liked it šššš„¹