Jesterkeitt
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Jesterkeitt5mthReplied to Mineral_FoxIm working on it now. planning to drop a chapter after Christmas.
Along the way, Ayan spotted a blond-haired boy walking towards a pier by a pond. Recognizing Naruto and witnessing the judgmental looks he received from the villagers and ninjas simply for his presence, Ayan couldn't help but empathize with Naruto's plight and vowed to protect him from being used and manipulated by the village.- Jesterkeitt9mthReplied to Oath_Of_A_Knight
It may seem that way in the start but the story is literally just starting and he is small child without the strength to protect himself yet. Its a means to an end.
Along the way, Ayan spotted a blond-haired boy walking towards a pier by a pond. Recognizing Naruto and witnessing the judgmental looks he received from the villagers and ninjas simply for his presence, Ayan couldn't help but empathize with Naruto's plight and vowed to protect him from being used and manipulated by the village. - Jesterkeitt9mthReplied to Oath_Of_A_Knight
Yea its just the start, yea he will reveal his powers eventually, yes he may take people with him but taking the world is all for another reason. Thanks for reading up until now.
Ayan understood that he would eventually have to reveal his abilities to Naruto, as he had plans to take this world with him and thought having Naruto as his partner in another world would be great. Ignoring the villagers' looks and judgment, Ayan walked over to Naruto and led him to the pier. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to HOLY_BOBCh 42 Five Great Visits
- Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Celestial_Creator
Never really plan for him to go around helping people just wanted him to grow some. it's still a work in progress I plan to find a balance of chaotic Nuetral.
Embracing the determination within him, Kurogiri swore to save Rin's clan and put an end to the oppression faced by smaller villages and clans. Recognizing the influence and dominance that the larger villages held, he decided to send each of his clones as messengers to the major villages, delivering a message of change and justice. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to CruelReality
Yea thats still going to happen
"Yeah, remember now. It was never about being a Demon King. It was about changing the world so others wouldn't have to suffer if they didn't want to," Jason said, his words resonating with Kurogiri. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to CruelReality
thanks I completely overlooked that
This paragraph has been deleted. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Rillik
Yea there is mind control but not on the villagers. the former ninja of grass yes but its hive mind like due to Queen bee quirk
However, when the villagers gathered, Kurogiri used his power to instill absolute obedience and loyalty in all of them, including Rin and Karin. He knew that in most demon king cases, those closest to him inevitably became his weakness through capture or betrayal. Kurogiri refused to let anyone become his undoing, and he was determined not to let anything hinder him from achieving his goals. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Rillik
I didn't really considered that but as a clone he maybe naked but I like to think him being to dark to truly see using hologram on his body.
As the squad made their way to the pile, the Chunin and Genin spread out in the area to check for clues. Meanwhile, the Kurogiri clone that was sent to get Rin's daughter made it to the house and used permeation to get inside. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Rillik
Karin and yes I'm using her mother because it's about 7 years before canon.
However, while remembering all the abuse that the villagers heaped upon her, and how it could potentially affect her daughter, ultimately agreed to support Kurogiri with a smile, introducing herself as Uzumaki Rin and informing him about her five-year-old daughter. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Rillik
that's a possibility but I didn't plan to do romance in this world. Because I have a plan to take him to another world at the end of naruto arc. In that world i can definitely considered a harem.
However, what the other nations did not know yet was how they treated Kurogiri would determine how he treated them. Kurogiri believed in returning kindness with kindness but would show his enemies the true wrath of the Demon King. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Rillik
Honestly it was a chance to show Kurogiri quality to respect those that live their life while dying for another. I didn't want him to be all business like until I gave him High spec. However volume 1 isnt my best work so its may not come across well.
Kurogiri decided not to chase after Kakashi and his team, honoring the sacrifice of his teammates. He and the Invisible Nomu made their way over to the Engine Nomu and clone with the two-remaining ninja brunt from the flames still alive. Kurogiri respected the resolve of the ninjas to die for their comrade and told them that he would let their leader go before draining the wind user of their chakra and breaking their necks. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to Rillik
yea I was thinking of treating Naruto like All for one did tomura make him Kurogiri apprentice.
However, what the other nations did not know yet was how they treated Kurogiri would determine how he treated them. Kurogiri believed in returning kindness with kindness but would show his enemies the true wrath of the Demon King. - Jesterkeitt10mthReplied to HOLY_BOB
Black Zetsu isn't the same as in the show. I've already altered his past so his I altered his personality base off of that. In this story with white Zetsu being made by Kaguya using the God tree know their creator.
Black Zetsu waited until Obito had fully disappeared before speaking to his White Zetsu half. "Arrogant brat, but I have to admit we are much closer to freeing mother than we have ever been before," said Black Zetsu.