William_McCaffrey

Another great chapter, the pacing is so good, and actually has a good transition between the war to other aspects, rounding out not just the mc but also the side characters too.

Get well soon, hope you are ok.

Take your time, your health is what’s important!!! Keep up the good work, but make sure to stay healthy first, and it was a good update with good scaling and progression, but also comedic in strength stuff, and the working for some stuff to work out was really well done.

Wow, just wow, just an interestingly crafted world and so well structured and balanced, well done.

Absolutely loving this story, can’t wait to see where it goes

This is super cool, keep up the good work!!!

Genuinely, only came across this book not long ago, and held onto it without reading it for a while, got to reading it about 4 days ago, could not stop at all, genuinely it’s so awesome, such an interesting, well planned and thought out concept, it really redefines the world in your image and does something really cool, genuinely, really well done and keep up the good work.

Loving this so far, it’s the first Star Wars fan fic I’m not only properly able to understand as an occasional enjoyer of the series, but it’s really easy to invest in the mc and story, keep up the good work, it’s going awesome.

Glad you’re back, it’s a good reboot back into it, hope you’re doing ok

Another awesome chapter, I keep forgetting to save power stones lol, but I’ll throw some in tomorroe