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Juswa_Rawr

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  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawra month ago
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    Theres a lot of plot holes, the story is written around the protagonist rather than thinking that every single being and character have their own thought process. The story is written like you want this situation to happen thinking so you just put all kinds of actions, like how shield automatically ask a random person for advices when that said person (in their supposedly perspective doesn't know what is happening!).

  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Posted

    Every past reviews are true, however the writer must have forgotten then timeline indications. Because it will start to be confusing if they're still kids, teens, adults or whatnot.

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  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Posted

    FOR ANY NO-HAREM LOYALIST, STOP! Because this is a great find. Ignore the harem tag the plot is great and the progression is great. So far there's only 2 people in the harem at ch49.

  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Replied to InnerVoice

    Welcome to the future?

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  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Posted

    10/10 good story, perfect representation on how characters act, and who they are.

  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Commented

    This is cool, showcasing how each form is shown and designed.

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  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Posted

    The concept is great, the si character is written quite well, theres the background, the change on how or why he became like this...but i think there are more improvement on the pacing since it looking quite fast at first but its okay to slowdown for a while for each important points and subtle notify on what date it is like birthday celeb or festivities. So far promising result, wish there wont be harem since this world revolves around demons and killing them is the focus, it just won't fit well in the story love interest sure but lets be real they would rather do so after killing muzan based on how the kny characters mindset. So far looking well 9/10

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  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr9 months ago
    Replied to dhd

    Yes... but incest???

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  • Juswa_Rawr
    Juswa_Rawr10 months ago
    Posted

    Hidden Gem......................................