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OP MC + reborn/transmigration = 👍
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After 10+ chapter still waiting for Xiao Yan to die. Just kill him already, 😒😂. Let's move on with him & focus to this new protagonist. Being an accomplice to his master in kidnapping one of our MC's people, makes him a bad person. He will be Lin Tian next 🎯 and will be punish harshly 🤭😂
indeed.
interesting technique 😏😂
so far I like your novel but tbh, I'm not a fan of multiple system in a novel. Either used by an ally or the villain. For me, "system" only belongs to the MC. that what makes him/her special & one of a kind... regardless, this is your novel I'm sure you have plans for introducing it. Just hoping that you will not focus too much on the character using it. I like side stories in moderations. thank you
not a fan of multiple transmigrated character... Lucas, our MC is enough... him supported by his system, makes him unique & special ... now, it's no more with this Seth aka "Quickscar" (also with his own system)... with his history with our MC, he might became an ally. however, its more interesting if he became a villain instead. regardless, its your novel so its upto you how to deal with this additional character. just please don't focus on his life too much and dedicate a lot of chapters (in the future) since as a reader It's not fun to read fillers. thank you.
good to know that... nice...
hope this doesnt turn him into evil & betray his friend