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Shameless review I feel my writing quality could be better which is why I gave it a 3/5 this is my first novel so bare with me. My update stability is every day except for the days I don't have ideas for a chapter. My story Is very fast-paced so if u like that type I think you'll enjoy it. Character design is fine I have complaints like not being descriptive enough but that will change starting with chapter 5. I haven't explored the world or explained its rules yet but I'm sure.......actually no in my head I could imagine it well but in the story, I'm practicing how to describe the scenery. I'm using this novel to improve my writing abilities so i estimate it will be 15-30 chapter long so a short story or 1 volume to be exact

Loving this story so far!!![img=recommend]

I will try to make chapter 2 a lot longer

nah vampire system was kinda boring this one drew me in more