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SarmelAC

SarmelAC

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2021-08-07 JoinedColombia
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC12d
    Commented

    because it has some chapters that cause me so much anger or laziness, and then come out with one like these that give me so much emotion, thanks for the story.

    Ch 37 The one still lost in his past and those from the past who comes to save him.
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    Is it Wrong to Try to Climb to The Top From Danmachi? (AU)
    Anime & Comics · ZaelKliz
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC12d
    Commented

    If I skip the whole backstory, will I see something that I won't understand later in the main story?

    Ch 32 Rebellion: Their Ends. (2)
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    Is it Wrong to Try to Climb to The Top From Danmachi? (AU)
    Anime & Comics · ZaelKliz
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC12d
    Commented

    without wanting to sound rude, really the only thing he came up with was to create a group chat that will be messing with everything he does, it seems to me something super unnecessary and boring especially because they are all too strong entities that are going to tell him everything just because they feel sorry or because they think he deserves everything for his sad story, or because they want to ask for forgiveness as if they have human feelings (feeling that what they did is wrong) and feel they should give everything to the protagonist just because they do

    [The Best mother strangely evaluates Hestia. As if she was trying to determine if she was right one for you]
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    Is it Wrong to Try to Climb to The Top From Danmachi? (AU)
    Anime & Comics · ZaelKliz
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC12d
    Commented

    I see, again a lapdog of a princess, forced by a weak ret he could kill at any time, what a shame, so many years of suffering and when he is reborn with more time to train again treated as a toy.... I expected a lot from this story 👍🏽

    Ch 6 King Palace
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    Jobless Reincarnation of The Magic God
    Anime & Comics · Mistka
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC1mth
    Commented

    wow, even the force is convenient to the plot.

    Before I could put it away Welt yanked the book out of my hand.
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    Ultimate Herrsher in DxD
    Anime & Comics · Shonpufi
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC1mth
    Replied to Discarded

    What are the others ?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 – Ryuen’s submission
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    Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C
    Anime & Comics · Metarln
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC2mth
    Commented

    what magic is that?

    "I see, Another thing is that you still have your magic power, but I recommend you not to use your God Tears Magic because a god and goddess residing with mortals are probably not so pleased when mortals reshape their world."
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    Jobless Reincarnation of The Magic God
    Anime & Comics · Mistka
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC2mth
    Replied to Daichi_TBR193

    thank you, everything is fine now.

    Ch 2 And Then There Were 10
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    Ben 10: Apex Hero
    Others · Daichi_TBR193
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC2mth
    Replied to Darknight558

    do you have to put up with 15 chapters of such horrendous writing?

    Ch 1 Prologue-(Fixed)
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    I become Satoru Gojo but in Black Clover
    Anime & Comics · Darknight558
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC2mth
    Commented

    Forced until I can't do it anymore

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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC3mth
    Commented

    Aren't they 10-year-old children? It feels more and more strange that they do those things so obvious when they are still children.

    Yeah, that sounded really weird, didn't it? Whatever…I'm rolling with that comparison.
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    Ben 10: Apex Hero
    Others · Daichi_TBR193
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC3mth
    Commented

    Am I the only one who gets the chapter like this?

    Ch 2 And Then There Were 10
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    Ben 10: Apex Hero
    Others · Daichi_TBR193
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC3mth
    Commented

    I'm sorry if I complain about your story, but that game with momo and the others is disgusting to me, they are a 6-year-old boy, not at least teenagers, they are CHILDREN (translator)

    Ch 22 22.Momo-chan and Gifts.
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    Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King
    Anime & Comics · Sol_Pendragon
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC3mth
    Commented

    in book must have all the characters of black clover, shouldn't he do something intelligent and read about all the magics that exist since he has no desire to reincarnate? (translator)

    Yami's Dark Magic, Yuno's Wind Magic, Julius' Time Magic, William's Tree Magic, Dorothy's Magic that I forgot the name of, and... well, actually that's all I think'
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    Black Clover - The Point System
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC4mth
    Commented

    Wouldn't it be better to use fewer periods? Maybe it would be better to use periods in a row, or more commas, but the text so far apart is weird. (translator)

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    Marvel : Fateful Encounter
    Anime & Comics · BOB_THE_BREAKER
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC4mth
    Commented

    I don't know if it's just me but the words in capital letters when I read them it's like a shout, in my opinion, if it's to show that a higher ranking or abstract entity is going to speak it seems to me that italics would be better (translator).

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    Marvel : Fateful Encounter
    Anime & Comics · BOB_THE_BREAKER
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC4mth
    Commented

    The story is... passable. The only thing I wonder is how a being who has reincarnated 9 times and although he does not remember all the lives but knows of some lives and with information of different forms of training is so weak, taking into account that the universe in which this a 17 year old boy who just knew the supernatural which after 2 years and fights with powerful gods, and the reincarnated even with so many years barely withstood one. It is a serious question of which I would like to know a logical argument, please. (translator)

    Ch 67 [67] Trouble in the Beach
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    Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
    Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC5mth
    Commented

    unnecessary

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    The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC5mth
    Replied to KojiSan

    we have 62 chapters of development, but you are still the one who decides when and how to act (translator).

    He was scared of walking out of his place and staring at his people in the eye, what should he say to them? It was easy years ago when he earned their trust with his promises of wealth and delivered it, but now? How can he overcome their grief… how can he… redeem himself.
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    Madara in the Avatar World
    Anime & Comics · KojiSan
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  • SarmelAC
    SarmelAC7mth
    Commented

    +1

    ☻ Yes (Gotta keep the bloodline pure!)
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    Solo Leveling : Infinite Path
    Anime & Comics · ashes_
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