SarmelAC
Writing
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without wanting to sound rude, really the only thing he came up with was to create a group chat that will be messing with everything he does, it seems to me something super unnecessary and boring especially because they are all too strong entities that are going to tell him everything just because they feel sorry or because they think he deserves everything for his sad story, or because they want to ask for forgiveness as if they have human feelings (feeling that what they did is wrong) and feel they should give everything to the protagonist just because they do
wow, even the force is convenient to the plot.
what magic is that?
Forced until I can't do it anymore
Aren't they 10-year-old children? It feels more and more strange that they do those things so obvious when they are still children.
in book must have all the characters of black clover, shouldn't he do something intelligent and read about all the magics that exist since he has no desire to reincarnate? (translator)
Wouldn't it be better to use fewer periods? Maybe it would be better to use periods in a row, or more commas, but the text so far apart is weird. (translator)
I don't know if it's just me but the words in capital letters when I read them it's like a shout, in my opinion, if it's to show that a higher ranking or abstract entity is going to speak it seems to me that italics would be better (translator).
The story is... passable. The only thing I wonder is how a being who has reincarnated 9 times and although he does not remember all the lives but knows of some lives and with information of different forms of training is so weak, taking into account that the universe in which this a 17 year old boy who just knew the supernatural which after 2 years and fights with powerful gods, and the reincarnated even with so many years barely withstood one. It is a serious question of which I would like to know a logical argument, please. (translator)
unnecessary
we have 62 chapters of development, but you are still the one who decides when and how to act (translator).
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