CursedReincarnator

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the second one is even more ridiculous as the inn has protection against destiny itself.

name's vera, btw

eh? but how about that little girl from the start? the one whom escaped to the inn?

Certainly, removing grammatical errors will help your novel improve its quality. Also, be a lot more realistic in a fictional story. The story is fictional, yes, but the way the people interacts with each other and the things left untouched by the fictional area should still be realistic.

the ring of regressing back to time?