no problem, Just take your time when writing since i saw people writer story in a hurry making the stories confusing since you don't know Who Is Who or what they are doing or talking about

thanks for the chapter. A suggestioni for you pick a notebook or anything tò writer in and writer a simplified versione of every chapter and for the next One that you are writing so you have can see the way of the story Is going. in the First few Pages write every character with a short description so you don't forget any character by mistake .

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Thanks for the chapter, hope you continue your book without problems. For the future if your book has a lot of chapters and you want to do a little vacation it's better if you pick a notebook in which you write the character inside the story in the first couple of pages with their role (protagonist, antagonist ect.)what is their job and a short physical description, then you can write a summary of the story going by chapter or chapters if they are the continue of the precedent chapter/s.

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A good chapter, that gives us a bit more information about the Demons, saying that they can control humans and monsters, maybe the Korda that wanted to kidnap the elves and the young girl with the skill of true eyes(I don't remember her name) was under control of the demon since with that skill she can know if someone is under control of a demon or if the demon is disguised as a human (there is nothing that says that demons can't disguise as humans). So I hope that the story continues to be this amazing, if you have problems in the product of chapters don't be afraid to ask for help.

Hey there is a problem the chapter is repeating itself idk if it's intentional or not but if it's not intentional then can you please fix it

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Thanks for the chapter I wonder if the synchronization reaches a certain percentage he can summon his slaves in irl or with the higher synchronization he gets the cat instinct of having a territory for his female or something similar

Thanks for the chapter but I think that the cats definitely pooped his entire house (irl) and I want to see his reaction to it

Thanks for the chapter. May the the legendary catopus (i hope I wrote it right ) enslave the king to rule the entire kingdom and enforce his laws.

Thanks for the chapter, idk if you have problem at remembering the names of the characters in irl and in the game and what are they doing, but if you do I suggest using a diary where you write the irl name and nickname of the characters leaving a little of space before putting their nickname so you can put a line indicating how many times they died in the game then after the tname and nickname you write with a Pencil what are they doing so you don't have to go in the other chapters to remember limiting the stress and the number of things you need to remember so you can make more chapters easier and without worry of forgetting a character and what they were doing

Thanks for the chapter and please continue this story because I know similar stories but yours is more balanced and fun because in similar stories that make the protagonist know about 89% to 98% of the game but you made the protagonist know only about 30% or a little more about the game like normal people know about the game they play, only hearing the word messages send by the system or by searching with curiosity. So please do not abandon this story , if you are thinking about it, because this is the most interesting story and funny story I have read of this category