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    Zephr_Duval6h ago
    Replied to Little_Mhartini

    is that a Skyrim reference πŸ€”

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    Zephr_Duval11d ago
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    The story's not bad but not too good either all in all a bit too gray could use more character interaction between MC and others otherwise a top tier story

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    Zephr_Duval21d ago
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    quick question does anybody know a Naruto fanfic with Naruko as the single fml?

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    Zephr_Duval22d ago
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    really good story so far keep it up and you could make naruko the fml because he is currently in the anbu so you could make it so that somehow naruko finds out ryuji's identity as an anbu protecting her and you could start the romance from there.

  • Zephr_Duval
    Zephr_Duval22d ago
    Replied to renito101

    you could make naruko the fml because he is currently in the anbu so you could make it so that somehow naruko finds out ryuji's identity as an anbu protecting her and you could start the romance from there.

  • Zephr_Duval
    Zephr_Duvala month ago
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    fairy tail world with Irene Belserion as the fl and the Erza's father 400 years in dragonov .protagonist who only has affinity towards darkness magic (Imu's devil fruit abilities,no dragon slayer magic) but instead of the weakness of seawater like normal devil fruits the usage of his magic causes him to go hollow from constant usage and normally his emotions extremely dulled so to others he apears extremely ereeie yet he could have a personality similar to yoriichi tsugikuni from demon slayer strong and silent yet noble and kind despite his condition, so to combat without relying on his magic too heavily the MC learns to fight with mutiple weapons (his combat style can be like goblin slayer, which is slow, methodical, ruthless but instead of goblins it's towards dragons) and his title can be like "venator draconum" which means dragon hunter or "Draco Interfectorem" which means dragon slayer.

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    Zephr_Duvala month ago
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    really good story so far keep it up webnovel really needs more content on black clover with no harem. As an opinion on content you could add spacial rifts which could open in high magic zones which could be like portals similar or different dimensions with time dilution so you could add more arcs in the story without messing with the timeline or make it so that the spacial rifts become like a Blindspot in lucious's foresight. My advice for romance make it a slow burn romance because despite the anime showing her to be fiery and a battle junkie, she is incredibly intelligent so slow burn from strangers to trusted allies to close friends to lovers , but make sure the transition from strangers to close friends is seamless through adversity which could be through those spacial rifts I mentioned earlier some other way and then from close friends to lovers is like a quiet realization for both of them not like the suspense in regular romance as the character meroleona is bold, strong, and fiery yet intelligent beyond what most give her credit for but this is just my opinion and this is your fanfic which is based on your views on the characters so it is up to you how the story goes good luck πŸ‘ PS update soon it's really good gem of a story.

  • Zephr_Duval
    Zephr_Duvala month ago
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    my advice make it a slow burn romance because despite the anime showing her to be fiery and a battle junkie, she is incredibly intelligent so slow burn from strangers to trusted allies to close friends to lovers , but make sure the transition from strangers to close friends is seamless through adversity and time and then from close friends to lovers is like a quiet realization for both of them not like the suspense in regular romance as the character meroleona is bold, strong, and fiery yet intelligent beyond what most give her credit for but this is just my opinion and this is your fanfic which is based on your views on the characters so it is up to you how the story goes good luck πŸ‘ PS update soon it's really good gem of a story.

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    Zephr_Duvala month ago
    Posted

    good story so far keep it up but will there be any romance in the story ?