TheSlimyOne
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Great story, looking forwards to the next chapter.
So Danial's dad is All For One? We just got spoiled by the writer đ¤Ł
So this is a novel in a novel?
Is Mc's power having low presence or something?
Ok brother, calm down, I can see that you are annoyed about the plot as is pretty common but I will try to make demon king as evil as he can be not a past hero or something like that and the rest... you were really close so I will try to make a few tweaks if you don't like. Thank you for sharing your opinion. - Yours Truly - TheSlimyOne