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The story started well, but then when GG developed, everything went wrong somehow, he inherited so much power, but at the age of 16 he was only able to do what to do and bite the hand of a bastard. MAKE THE MAIN CHARACTER AND NOW THE DESIRE TO READ DISAPPEARS BECAUSE OF HOW WEAK THE MAIN CHARACTER IS. I am writing through a translator, so there may be some mistakes, this is my subjective opinion.

I agree, but the Moria fruit is still possible, and the problem that you can’t eat 2 fruits can be attributed to its strength, sorry if it’s not clear, I wrote in English, it’s not my native language, and write as you like

The story is great, keep it up, everything is going well, just post chapters more often:):):)

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Cool, believe in yourself and don't listen to all the losers, you'll be fine, go ahead and write the original title of this novel please

Well done, keep it up, you have a good story and characters, just release it faster

Дякую за розділ, продовжуй у такому ж напрямку!!!