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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva8d
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    What if he uses the King Engine to intimidate the other students while highlighting his position as the event's biggest threat. It would be so cool!

    Ch 26 Chapter 26 : Hospitalized
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    MHA : Hero Time
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva16d
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    I really wanna see him using King Engine

    Ch 21 Chapter 21 : USJ 2
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    MHA : Hero Time
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva22d
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    Ch 59 Chapter 59 : Payback!
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    Fairy Tail : The Strongest Creature
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva22d
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    MC: Get out of my way... Or you'll get punched. - He said with a terrifying aura surrounding him. The sound of heartbeats roaring like giant drums. His features darkened and a dangerous gleam in his eyes, sparks of OfA around his body.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 : Battle Trial 6
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    MHA : Hero Time
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  • Adelmo_Silva
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    King Engine is like a very nerfed version of Conqueror's Haki. Honestly, it seems like a really cool power. Intimidate weaker opponents with just the power of his heartbeat. Considering that he has OfA, it is possible that this ability can be improved.

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 : Class 1-A
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    MHA : Hero Time
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva3mth
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    I would like to see him freeze the bandits in fear with his killing intent, just like Zoro once did, but I understand that the MC is still a child. I look forward to the future, this fanfic has absurd potential. It would have been nice if there was at least a scene showing what Shanks thinks of Bad and his fighting spirit.

    Ch 7 Mountain Bandits
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    Being Bad in One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Daoist0kxr4h
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva3mth
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    Tem alguns elementos chineses nessa novel, há alguma chance de eu encontrar a original? Não estou acusando de plágio nem nada mas fiquei curioso pra ver se onde saiu sua inspiração pra essa história.

    Ch 2 A Guerra Começa
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    Sistema De Login De Derrotas One Piece
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva3mth
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    The story has some words in Chinese. Is it possible to find the original novel? I would really like to read it.

    Ch 2 A Guerra Começa
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    Sistema De Login De Derrotas One Piece
    Anime & Comics · King_Of_Heavens
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva3mth
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    do a scene similar to this

    Ch 6 Time skip
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    Being Bad in One Piece
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Ino

    Ch 3 Old Friends & Arrangements
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    Daiki Sarutobi: A leaf village story
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Femboys

    Ch 5 Poll!
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    Femboy maker, becoming a system Operator
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    I'm starting to like this novel. Sasuke could carry out missions with Haku, as being more feminine would make him feel more comfortable. I think it's appropriate, since Sasuke hasn't been completely changed yet and carrying out the missions with Naruto or any other man would be strange.

    Ch 6 The wave mission (R16?)
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    Femboy maker, becoming a system Operator
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    One thing to protect? How about Robin and Hancock?

    Ch 3 Leaving
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    Being Bad in One Piece
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Metal Bat from One Punch is one of my favorite characters, both in personality and characterization. His design is very cool.

    Ch 1 Fucking Survey
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    Being Bad in One Piece
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Just base yourself on Nico Robins' techniques. With the MC skill awakening, I believe the Clones skill is possible, if I understand 😏

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 : This is just the appetizer!
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    My Hero Academia : Lust Hero
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Chronologically speaking, Wendy is hundreds of years old, just like Natsu, but I think it would be a good idea to age her earlier, so it doesn't look weird. In terms of power, is Natsu as strong as he was after the 1 year time skip or a little weaker due to the absence of Fire Dragon King Mode? It would be really cool to see him casually melt down the entire GMG arena.

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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    This story is going very well. I can't wait to see the reaction of the other guild members when they see how strong Natsu has become. I have a question, will he unlock the second origin along with the others? Because if so, then Natsu would definitely reach a very high level of power. I'm excited, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Although I don't really like Boruto, it's undeniable that he has an absurd talent.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Master of Tools
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    A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World
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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Is Erza going to be in the harém?

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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4mth
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    Avoid showing too much of the character's statistics. For example, if he increases his strength, it only shows Strength: 30 > 60. The same thing about techniques, it only shows what he is actually going to buy. Showing dozens of techniques just to increase the size of the chapter will make the story very tiring. Just some advice. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Ch 11 08 New Jutsu!! Allocating Stat Points! Part 1
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    In Fairy Tail with a Naruto System
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