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King Engine is like a very nerfed version of Conqueror's Haki. Honestly, it seems like a really cool power. Intimidate weaker opponents with just the power of his heartbeat. Considering that he has OfA, it is possible that this ability can be improved.
I would like to see him freeze the bandits in fear with his killing intent, just like Zoro once did, but I understand that the MC is still a child. I look forward to the future, this fanfic has absurd potential. It would have been nice if there was at least a scene showing what Shanks thinks of Bad and his fighting spirit.
I'm starting to like this novel. Sasuke could carry out missions with Haku, as being more feminine would make him feel more comfortable. I think it's appropriate, since Sasuke hasn't been completely changed yet and carrying out the missions with Naruto or any other man would be strange.
Chronologically speaking, Wendy is hundreds of years old, just like Natsu, but I think it would be a good idea to age her earlier, so it doesn't look weird. In terms of power, is Natsu as strong as he was after the 1 year time skip or a little weaker due to the absence of Fire Dragon King Mode? It would be really cool to see him casually melt down the entire GMG arena.
This story is going very well. I can't wait to see the reaction of the other guild members when they see how strong Natsu has become. I have a question, will he unlock the second origin along with the others? Because if so, then Natsu would definitely reach a very high level of power. I'm excited, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Is Erza going to be in the harém?
Avoid showing too much of the character's statistics. For example, if he increases his strength, it only shows Strength: 30 > 60. The same thing about techniques, it only shows what he is actually going to buy. Showing dozens of techniques just to increase the size of the chapter will make the story very tiring. Just some advice. Looking forward to the next chapter.