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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva20 days ago
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    considering that he is in another dimension, it would be interesting for him to have Time-Space powers in his Sharingan (Just like Obito. In the work, Sasuke also has something like that with his Rinegan).

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva22 days ago
    Commented

    He could keep Zoro's "King of Hell" title. It would be pretty cool.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva23 days ago
    Replied to Ddraig_Detta

    MC's problem is his body's innate capabilities. He's like Guy or Duy when it comes to Jutsus. Lack of talent. Honestly, it seems very plausible for someone from our world to wake up in the Ninja world and have no talent in Ninjutsu. It's much more realistic for him to have to depend on the system to get stronger than simply being a "Genius".

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silvaa month ago
    Replied to Daeranyx_Drakonar

    Just a feeling. I guess it makes sense since he's going to ride Daemon's dragon. His name could be Aemon too, o don't know.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva2 months ago
    Commented

    His true name is probably Daemon Targeryen

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva2 months ago
    Commented

    It would be really cool if he just fainted but remained standing, showing his willpower to not fall in battle. The MC after defeating so many enemies:

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva3 months ago
    Commented

    Killing Iruka is so cruel. I love him, one of the few people in the Naruto universe who really cared about Naruto, especially at the beginning of the work. He is an older brother figure, or even a father figure

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4 months ago
    Replied to DevilDaoyst

    He's not strong enough, that's why. It's unrealistic to expect the MC to do exactly what he wants, just because he wants to. This story seems to be a "Weak to Strong", so as long as he isn't strong enough, he will probably follow the canon to take advantage. It's worth remembering that he hopes to be seen as a hero to "escape" from Danzo. This mission on the bridge is exactly what he needs. He prioritized his companions (leaving Obito and Kakashi to rescue Rin, while he continued the mission) and the mission at the same time.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4 months ago
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    It wouldn't make sense for him to abandon his companions like that, especially considering that Minato could appear at any time. He completed the mission, that's for sure, but abandoning three comrades like that sounds like betrayal (It's worth remembering that superiors wouldn't come to the conclusion that the MC expected the three of them to escape). Danzo already seems too interesting in him and something like that would be a good opening for him to explore. As long as the MC continues to be seen as a hero, he will have the initiative.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4 months ago
    Commented

    I read the entire story until the last chapter released. Honestly, it's a very good idea, but I have the feeling that something is missing. I think that the excessive use of AI to write the chapters takes away a lot of the good things that could have been in the story. There is a lack of “humanization” in the story. For example, the tests that the MC takes to get into Arsenal's school are very intense and unrealistic regarding the condition of the children who are trying to pass. 5-year-olds don't have the physique, much less the maturity, to deal with something so intense. Furthermore, Arsene Wenger would have noticed MC much earlier, as he himself is a coach who likes to use young players. Fabregas for example, if I'm not mistaken, debuted at Arsenal when he was 16 years old.