Better than the last one bro ill wait for the 2nd chapter, dont scratchthe time period that long pls. at least give us advise when and how long

Interesting story, nice characters and unpredictble Main char, gives my self cote vibes, i guees there some Things in commun whit the serieeses

Guys, please leave a review how you enjoyed it, How i can do thinks better, and how to get more in you taste. Because when you do this i can improve my writing and i can do the Next chapters more exiting. -Joe