That's a fair point. But at the same time, the bullet covered in venom would shed said venom during the reaction which sent the bullet flying out of the chamber. The speed and mini-explosion would burn/fling off any venom on it during the MC firing the bullet.

Have you read any DC or Marvel comics lately? Deathstroke fought the Justice League to a standstill and even beat then on occasion. That's more than enough to beat TVD vampires lol. Also, if you haven't read the fanfic, don't make a review please. I'm looking for constructive criticism from reviews and someone who hasn't read the fanfic simply can't give that.

I'm pretty much saying that one is Magical (TVD) and the other is Biological and through a mutated retrovirus (Underworld). The Originals are the original vampires wrought by Magical means while Marcus and his brother (Underworld) are the original vampire and werewolf, respectively, through a mutation in the Immortal bloodline.

I'm not mad, my friend. Just saying how I see Deathstoke's strength.

That's a fair point. Every one deals with it differently, as you say, and my MC deals with it in his own way. He isn't stopped by his thoughts and still does his job, as everyone in his particular job would do so. Either way, thank you for your service in whichever armed forces you were in - I have massive respect for those who choose to serve their country! :)

Look at the cover photo for the novel. That's how I see Michael in my head when I write. He's about 6'5", broad and well-muscled physique, light blond hair and light green eyes.

Yeah, I went out for some pre-Christmas drinks with a few of my mates.

Yep.

Thank you for the complement! :)

No, Dracula was a mortal man by the name of Vladislaus Dragulia or some other name similar to that. Then he was killed by Gabriel (Van Helsing) and made a pact WITH the Devil which turned him into a vampire. Then he began to call himself Dracula.

I can't add all of that stuff or implement everything but I like the idea of adding Blade and Kaulder - along with Van Helsing, the four of them could make quite the fearful group of immortal hunters.

The way I'm going about it is that there are different species/types of all types of supernatural creatures. The Magical Kind - the Vampires from TVD, Dracula from 'Van Helsing' and the Werewolf from 'Van Helsing' (creatures made through magical means, basically). The Natural Kind - Witches and the Werewolves from TVD (creatures that are basically humans but with extra genes that effect them in natural ways). The Biological, Mutated Kind - The Vampires and Lycans from 'Underworld' (creatures that are born/created/mutated from a type of retrovirus derivative from the Immortal bloodline in 'Underworld'). Each have their own weaknesses and strengths but this is the best way for me to separate them up into their own categories.

As time goes by, yeah, he'll get an upgrade to his guns.

Exactly - imagine what Superman could do if he just studied a little magic? But then again, I guess he'd be too OP after that lol.

Next chapter as in Chapter 7 lol.

It's harder to do in a movie setting but next chapter will have some original dialogue between the MC and Dracula. And after that when canon really starts rolling, original dialogue will happen quite a bit. Thanks for the constructive criticism, however, it helps me improve the story! :)

He'd be able to control himself better than any other human could due to the serums flowing through his blood along with who he was before he lost his memories from his current body. He'd pretty much be a super soldier werewolf lol. Not that I'm gonna turn him into that because he'd still turn every full moon and he'd be incredibly weak to silver and wolfsbane which are inconvenient for what I have planned for the MC.

In all seriousness though, this is obviously a mistake. I'll fix it now lol. Thanks for pointing it out!

Good ol' Lucifer. Not evil, world-destroyer Lucifer but simply Lucifer who makes deals with those who need them regardless of the consequences. You could say he's more like Lucifer from the TV show 'Lucifer' prior to meeting and falling in love with Chloe (the Detective).