Nice one the novel or story so far is great.Nice grammar but some petty mistakes and repeatition of words.The novel is so great that I will compare it to my vampire system.

When is he going to get his system I am impatient.

Thanks for the update.

Ok good script line and the characters names too are very known in existence unlike many novels.This novel can be very great in the future.It can surpass My vampire System.

Ok very good but the update line is very not good.

Very great good novel.

Good one today too author.

Ok good.

Nice one but where is the system part am really waiting.

New novel.gonna be great