pace is a bit slow (good slow burn), chapters are a bit too long (like why don't you just split em lol)
story is great, near-professional quality
world is interesting, wish it's a bit more eastern than western but alright
ANYWAY KEEP ON WRITING
??? seem to find this line almost everywhere these days
hilarious hahaha
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