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ILove_Hayan04810dCommentedI really tried my best ignoring it but....man I can't help but feel that the majority of this fic is written by ChatGPT. That overly descriptive type of writing is just too obvious. TBH I would be okay with it. This is not the first fic I read that used ChatGPT but this is just too much. Use it sparingly, please. Some may notice and not mind or may not notice at all but for me who read over five hundred + webnovels at this point, it's just so off putting. I know you are a newbie author but relying on AI in terms of writing and using it as a crutch is never good. Based on my experience the ones who usually improve the fastest are those who don't rely on such things...yes, the first chapters may be un-edited and rough but their stories vastly improve every succeeding volume. Don't make AI a crutch.
Ch 20 The art of negociation- ILove_Hayan04810dCommented
oof
I just possessed Joffrey Fucking Baratheon… - ILove_Hayan04816dCommented
evening?
It was around four in the evening when Jinah and Haru made their way back to the former's apartment after an eventful yet short day. - ILove_Hayan04825dCommented
tf, then he could just spam Fire Ring...or any stronger magic and he will be invincible.
"Most importantly, the passive ability of this meditation art ensures that I never have to worry about running out of magic power. Truly an incredible passive ability." - ILove_Hayan04827dCommentedCh 64 [64] The Pretender
- ILove_Hayan04827dCommentedCh 63 [63] The Dark Sun of Britain
- ILove_Hayan04828dPosted
I have high expectations for this fanfic. Rarely have I seen LotM fanfics as most only contain a few chapters. So for my impressions. I can't really state any definitive comment as I have only read 10 chapters but so far it has been interesting. The MC is okay and is kinda likable, plot is straightforward, as for side characters I can't really say much as I'm still 10 chapters in and his interactions with others are rare. No glaring grammar and spelling flaws. The word count is also long which makes every chapter a worthwhile read. Overall, a satisfying and interesting read so far, really hoping that this continues and shape into a more interesting story as I can see so much potential. Kudos to the author, you are doing well and I really hope that this story will last for a long time. 9.6/10 for me as of chapter 10 tldr: Pros: >MC is not an idiot at least >Has LotM elements >Word count per chapter is long >No Glaring Grammar and Spelling mistakes >Straightforward Plot Cons: >Due to the Straightforward Plot established in the premise it can get predictable but predictable plot doesn't always mean bad execution. As long as the author executes the plot well and introduces characters and worlds with depth it should be fine.
- ILove_Hayan04828dCommentedCh 3 3. The Beginning
- ILove_Hayan04828dCommented'Never mind World, that's the last option. Wait since you are World and I am wearing a suit and especially since I wouldn't trust my life with anything else. You can be considered as my other self or the other half. I can play as The Fool from Lord of the Mysteries. It was a great novel, we can also build our guild and my game character around the theme. Good old fantasy horror with old and outer gods in the mix. I can use the gun with a lightsaber in this fight, like a true American citizen. American breathing. '
- ILove_Hayan04828dCommentedCh 2 2. The Game
- ILove_Hayan04828dCommentedCh 1 1. The End
- ILove_Hayan04828dCommented
COI is Good~
For entertainment, I used to watch anime, read books like novels and comics or watch f1 or some other racing programs like Moto GP. Now that I think about it, I haven't watched any new anime or any show due to my work. So I am not sure about it. As for novels, I had recently finished reading LOTM. It was a masterpiece if I do say so myself. But I didn't get the chance to read its next book Circle of Inevitability. But I did read the author's other novel, The Throne of Magical Arcana. COI didn't have many chapters back then but last time I checked, it had more than 500 chapters. - ILove_Hayan04828dCommented
Rukiaaa!!!
And damn you guys are as horny as me hahaha. Looks like the next world is going to bleach huh, can you drop the names of all the beautiful characters here, I have to see how to flow the story naturally. - ILove_Hayan04828dCommentedCh 62 [62] Father
- ILove_Hayan04828dCommented
Ayooo
Alvin, if only you were a woman! - ILove_Hayan04829dCommentedCh 61 [61] *****
- ILove_Hayan04830dPosted
This is without a doubt a gem of a fanfic. The story, the characters...I can't help but be immersed. This brings back the same feeling when I read my very first HP fanfic and I thought to myself. Fanfiction can sometimes be better than the original. I love the MCs mindset, his interaction with other characters, the other characters' impression of him, the plot progression is also solid. I have only one thing to say about the author...you are doing a good job. Keep cooking.
- ILove_Hayan0481mthCommentedCh 113 Chapter 113: Black Demon Title!
- ILove_Hayan0481mthCommented
Nice
"Well now that I know there's an afterlife, I can plan accordingly. Afterall if there's a way to get in, then there's a way to get out. And don't worry, I don't plan on dying any time soon," I reassured him.