MarSher67

I wasted money on this, that's cruel.

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your book is very confusing,,,who are the male and female in the story,,so many vocabulary error,, the she is a he or his and the he is the she or her. going chapter by chapter to truly understand what you trying to write. Use tools as grammar to improve your language skills, as I imagine English isn't your 1st language. Learn the language before you write so that you can make phrases that make sense and that your readers will understand .

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola