Isn't this from a chinese novel?? Very interesting way to promote, even though this is the same as other novel by Author 'Toaa Grandson',, which comes from the Chinese translation.

I'm itching about this... why would the MC have a legion if the one always fighting is the MC himself?? And the whole thing about the mc being overly affectionate and worried about the legion is kind of stupid to me. Asborne/Sung Jin-Woo vibes are not there at all

I'll bet that you wrote this 'isn't your original story' in the description after someone found out that you copied the story,, because I don't think I read it when the story was in around 20 chapter

Translated chinese story.

Why not Sasuki?🧐

Pinjol? Rentenir? Gilasih bro sampe ratusan juta begitu... buat apa aja itu duit?!

I'm fed up with this simp story. Author ruined the story itself

Wasn't Harry Potter killed by MC to get his wizard blood,, or am I reading wrong?

Chinese novel indeed. I already suspected the MC's personality, MC's motivation, even the MC's cheat. And the conflict in this chapter makes it even more obvious🌚 dayum, why am I always responsive when it's about Chinese writing?!

Already done ya

Chinese novel indeed

Lots of potential. Although the concept of Merchant is not very new, but the direction that the author took for this story is very fresh. Especially with LN which not many people know. New taste

Wow,, detail😲 Sasuga people of wakanda~ Meskipun lebih baik kau menjualnya dengan sangat terbatas karena akan sangat menambahkan nilai jualnya. Seperti dijual ke keluarga Kerajaan/Bangsawan yang aku yakin pasti sangat tertarik dengan kertas seputih salju dan setipis sutra (lol), entah itu untuk koleksi atau ajang kekayaan untuk dijadikan surat pengirim pesan. Dan kau pasti tahu betapa borosnya para orang kaya itu kan? Seperti halnya Rolex dan merk-merk mewah lainnya. (Google translate)

Well, if you read the author's previous stories then you'll understand how fond he is of making fillers. The story only stops at 200 chapter and the rest is just filler, which shows the creativity of the author has run out.

Is this a plot hole, Author? MC introduces himself as Eridel, which is the same name as the System. Why didn't Gaia notice it? I think you should use the name Jonah.

What? Dont tell me if the Author is a simp for Chizuru too? I can understand it's Sakurajima Mai, but for real you liked Kanojo Okarishimasu??

After entering the New World phase, it turns out that there are still flashbacks about YGGDRASIL huh. Why didn't make a format like this in the first place hmm? Just a few ingame chapters of Yggdrasil (no need for 60 chp) then when in the NW it's okay with lots of flashbacks that match the storyline. I mean, compared to something like this that shows how much verbose/rumbling it is. (Meh, this just the raving of an overlord fan who couldn't find FF that suits with taste)

Hmm, I thought it's just Assassination Classroom arc that doesn't make much sense... It's here too tho. Honestly, prefer the world To Love Ru even with all the absurd comedy that exists. (It's not that I hate the character development chapter,, just in this story it is very unreasonable and unnatural)

Just want to show that I exist here too🌚

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