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wait a minute ......... dust exists in a dimensional gap?
The story is fast paced but not really hurting the development,the MC is one of the few MC's from marvel fanfics to make sense, he acts according to his age and how he is brought up, and all of his actions have realistic consequences well as realistic as it can get in Marvel ,overall the story is one of the better stories abt Marvel and author you're doing great ,keep up the good work