Well yes the manga is, but he doesn’t seem to be following the manga. He’s just loosely basing it off the game and then making stuff up as he goes

Not really right? Unless I’m remembering wrong, Mew isn’t actually that strong it just has the dna of every Pokémon which allows it to do any move (besides Arceus’)

I’m confused is this real or a joke 😭

Technically pokemon can’t die, if he’s going to follow game rules. We’ll have to see if any of that gets brought up in the first place though

Yeah it seems like another major plot hole. Unless he explains that he let them use it in oasis on purpose, why are they able to use ninjutsu but the mutants can’t use their mutant powers? Or superhero’s use their powers

Yet he isn’t a dragon type 😞

So if I’m not mistaken, this is in the past before the main series correct? Because cellphones do exist in the Naruto universe. Or at least something similar. We’ve seen background characters walk by with them before in the show.

Not even close. Hope they don’t blindly trust it. Also if his goal was to act like he was from a different world anyways, wouldn’t it have been better to bring Bumblebee? Better proof than summoning an horse, which could be blown off as a technique they don’t know about

Sigh

I’ll start by saying that I do enjoy reading this… at certain spots. I didn’t go into this expecting it to be professional, and it’s not like I think I can do better. That doesn’t mean I can’t criticize the flaws, which some are pretty major. tldr; it’s okay if you don’t think too hard, but would’ve probably been better as it’s own story rather than an MCU fanfic. Most of its major problems are including already existing characters The story is wildly inconsistent or abrupt. The author changes things, or just straight up ignores crucial plot points that he made as recently as a few chapters ago. They could easily be solved by editing the chapter, or not even exist if he simply reread the previous chapters or kept notes. It’s also so hard to read for someone who’s knows Marvel because the timelines are all wrong and characters don’t act the way you think they should. I’ll give that some slack because Marvel timeline is already screwy and this is a fanfic so I don’t expect it to be 1 to 1 anyways. But! For people who don’t know Marvel well it’s even worse because he doesn’t explain any background, even simply. So why certain crucial plot points or timelines are changed are never explained, and if you don’t have pretty decent knowledge of all the MCU it’s almost impossible to follow unless you turn your brain off and don’t think at all. Grammar is also pretty bad, but good enough as the Authors main language isn’t English. However it would be nice if he actually edited them out when people tell him it’s wrong.

Okay well that different if you’re still in school :p. I thought you were proudly saying you basically sit at home all day with no job or girlfriend

Seems kind of forced. Wasn’t he talking underwater before he even got the blessing? Plus that wasn’t in the skill description. Being able to talk underwater would require being able to make sound travel through the waves

So if his quest was “help a lady cross the road” but he failed to complete it he would die 🤨

Obviously untrue

Okay look I know this is an old story but wow. It’s so stupid. First, what was the point of making the MC immortal and hella strong if what was gonna happen next is “actually he’s not immortal or strong at all”. That makes 0 sense mainly because it’s his body that is immortal. The soul should have no effect on it. I can look past not being able to use the techniques, even though that’s stupid in its own way if you gave him the memories of the previous body. But you’re making the body, which is immortal btw, no longer immortal???

Seeing this last chapter made me cringe so hard that it took me 2 days to come back to this

It’s been 2 years are you dead yet

Okay you’re joking right? Some people don’t want to get married or have kids so that’s fine but you don’t have a job?