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  • haluwari
    haluwari2yr
    Commented

    Hellooooo

    Ch 7 "Sakuya, I can fly 'ttebayo!"
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    A Different Cherry Blossom
    Anime & Comics · GreenDragon1222
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  • haluwari
    haluwari2yr
    Replied to Paradox_Theory

    No romance reeeeeee!?

    Ch 3 Life In An Orphanage
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    A Different Cherry Blossom
    Anime & Comics · GreenDragon1222
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  • haluwari
    haluwari2yr
    Posted

    Writing quality: Fun at first. But started to get boring fast(explain in story development). Fighting sequence is somewhat fun to read. Main casts are slightly differ from cannon. Their development don't feel forced. . Story development: No divergence from cannon. MC do not attempt to interfere and change events. And sometimes she forget about plot and go along with event.... And inconsistency remembered plot when she noticed that author add more stuffs in fighting sequence to make it more interesting than cannon. Yeah, fighting sequence is only saving grace. . Character design: Main character don't look weird or out of place. . World background: Author tends to stick closely with cannon. Hard to know how much author understand naruto's lore. But nothing break so far.

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    To Become Godly *Hiatus*
    Anime & Comics · Xatoh_Rose
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  • haluwari
    haluwari2yr
    Commented

    What's kind of stupidity plot armor is that? Powers in naruto are much more grounded and hard than its shounen competitor. You can just make her go slaughter everyone without substantial reason. I don't think uchiha's rage can bridge power gaps that easily, not without level up sharing an together.

    Ch 21 The Power...of an Enraged Uchiha
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    To Become Godly *Hiatus*
    Anime & Comics · Xatoh_Rose
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