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crossover? from which universe? I don't recognize it
Dude, at least try to make it at least believable that a 6-month-old baby is talking and wanting to see politics? No parents are freaking out? No scientists want to study this case, at least special.
Can he set up online game simulations? I mean, even if it's for low-level hunters, it'll be good. Each game is different, with new strategies and adapting to the enemy. The question is, does he make changes to the games? Or does he literally just copy and not change/improve the games? Besides, it's worth exploring famous low-level franchises.
I'm enjoying it, so I recommend that you reevaluate the structure of the texts, it's a bit confusing and the reader gets lost very easily, especially in what is spoken or thought. It's worth seeing how the structure of some works is put together as a reference. Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to more.
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Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next chapters
It's time for MC to think sustainably, he needs land to breed magical animals and magical plants. His dependence on the wizarding market affects his progress, especially since we know that some plants are extinct on the market because of wizards. note: house elves or golems to take care of crops and animals
I think the only defect is the structure of the text, in some parts it is very confusing. Otherwise it's very good, the author manages to explore the potential of potions well and has a very good world development, he knew how to fit franchises like Tomb Raider very well
If he is already warning others about Diddy's parties why doesn't he gather evidence and report them, it seems easier and more correct