i may be biased as this stands as one of the few fics of TLK on the site, but its premise is good. the only thing i can really complain about is the harem tag because i dont know if youre going pokemon style or the sensible way and stopping at two, for the rest i can see this being a enjoyable fic (sorry for my grammar its my third language)

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this Is according tò my research on any site regarding this topic this Is the only fic i found which has a male MC using airbending in any type of situation, also seeing as this Is the only One i found whit a good storyline i have the highest hopes for this. good luck

i mean its the only frieren fic that covers this topic (what if a demone could understand human emoticons and the consequeces of that) right now and i want tò see where this goes, good luck.

i was wondering of Zoro as we have seen retained his haki would he have access tò curse Energy or does he get his father ability "heavenly pact" includig the divine restriction?

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also Sorry forn he grammar english Is my fourth language

its honestly heartwarming how your'e Building up toji and Zoro relationship. not even metioning i can actually see Zoro, considering its character,acting like this "acting like a mule" make very much sense in this contest . also the congratulation on expressing toji trauma of losing his wife but Deep down caring for Zoro and megumi still, in Is hown way good work man here the bott of approval and there gems [img=Your move][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

also why did all the people on the reviews use so many emojis like is it difficult to write somethig?

this is a marine story and thats rare in itself even more than diamond. its an intresting charachter that distinguish himself in ways that most fics dont think of. the only thing i could complain is that i want MORE!! but thats all, also will the mc have a romantic option /frienship seeing as hes woring himself like a gigolo, i dont mind it that much(counting also the bloodlust) and i understand the motives, but its a bit offputting. for the rest it a wonderful fic good work.

We will watch your career With great intrest

so the metal part Is the One that can connect him to gladius like the avatars do With other animals thats really cool

i think this is the only fic of the avatar genre that puts a normal human (even if modified to a cetain limit) in a survival setting that is pandora, you have an' opportunity to explore the nav'I reaction to a human breathing like them and living like them and the interactions that could happend because of it (hoping for a romance) and the axpects of the human consequeses on the planet and the tecnological advancments mc could bring, so really hoping for more my guy( im not a native speaker so if my english is incorrect sorry).

this Is a very good read a great ability for story telling and a topic a wanted to read for a loro o f time you my friend have my interest

realy interesting, the concept of the Hero of the smalfolk is something of a rarity in this types of fics even more One Who isn't all Moody and dark; so good luck man hoping for more.

as and italian this hurt my souls of we want ti Say brat se do not Say monello (its used for misbehaving Kids, mostly under the Age of 5) we Say stronzetto

not really seeing right now but just the hope that the fic could go on, you dont see much elder scrolss fictions and most of all not one on the snow elves,that explains my review so hoping This gem can truly shine best of luck to you author (the elder scrolls fans must rise up)