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jnnaoiffos10mthReplied to MagikarpBombado- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 32 32
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Desta fic, a única coisa boa é a gramática.O resto, parece o resumo de uma série de ações com pouca ou nenhuma inserção do personagem Ian. Claro, nos poucos capítulos em que ele aparece, é muito bom. Mas, logo depois, some completamente. Fica a dica, se você adora ver um personagem principal em ação, esta fic não é para você, pois o mc raramente aparece. Me lembrou muito a Naruto, com suas infindáveis horas e capítulos recheados de fillers.
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 33 [World War II] - Captain America - Bucky's Demise
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 32 [World War II] - Captain America - Capturing Arnim Zola
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 30 [World War II] - The Final Stretch
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 28 [World War II] - Captain America -Birth Of The Howling Commandos
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 26 [World War II] - Captain America - Battle
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 17 [World War II] - Operation Watchtower - The Mutant Brothers
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Sim, continue se divertindo. Em breve, um Lannister aparecerá para uma visita, Sr. Stark.
The assassins' vehicle exploded into flames, leaving Philips in shock. He turned to Howard, who was smiling, and said, "I think I might join you guys. This is the most fun I've had in months." - jnnaoiffos10mthCommented
Sério? Transformá-lo em uma boneca de exibição com elastano apertado? Porra, se isso acontecer, abandono a fic!
It was the last day of the training, and he couldn't help but wonder if his superiors were satisfied with his progress. His heart raced with anticipation as he hoped to be deployed in a top-notch military unit, one that could lead him to Camp Lehigh. His ultimate goal was to get his hands on the serum before Captain America was created. The thought of holding the power of the serum in his hands filled him with excitement, and he couldn't wait to achieve his dreams. - jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh 2 [The Man Who Changed History] - Prologue - An Unexpected Meeting
- jnnaoiffos10mthCommentedCh -1 *MUST READ* *VERY IMP.*
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Sério?Acho que é uma das poucas fics que não usa ela. Vou ler só por isso!
To clarify, characters such as Natasha Romanoff, **************, and others will not be included in the harem since their respective relationships with other characters have already been established. - jnnaoiffos10mthCommented
Aff. Clichê ao ponto de dar caganeira espontânea.
"Wh-Who a-are yo-you".. Xiao Tian said stammering out of fear of the unknown. "Fear not, for I am the incarnation of chaos" says the voice and materializes itself in the form of a dark body without and features visible. - jnnaoiffos10mthCommented
Uau. Se ele quer apagar o fogo afogando o ganso, só comprar belezas infláveis. Por mais estranho que possa ser, não faz o mc sofrer que nem uma mula por causa de problemas. Sinceramente, fanfics de harém me dão arrepios. E não de um jeito bom.
"Sigh..it feels so boring in college, I wish I could travel to the world of Douluo Dalu and become a top powerhouse and have a harem of peerless beauties.." thought Xiao Tian while shifting his gaze towards the crossroad. - jnnaoiffos11mthCommented
A vingança das xícaras começa! Alvo encontrado... Biscoitos! Devorar todos eles!
"It is more than enough, Professor." He answered, finally out of his stupor "Now, you should probably tell me more about magic, and Hogwarts too, before I lose my mind trying to understand why this cup is eating all the biscuits." - jnnaoiffos11mthCommented
Só espero que o autor não faça Magnus dominar tudo e a todos em seus primeiros anos como a maioria das fanfics. Isso é tão broxante que tira o sabor de uma boa leitura. Ah, outra coisa: A escrita está ÓTIMA! MAS cuidado com o excesso de comédia ou situações embaraçosas que eventualmente levarão a alívio cômico. Isso estraga a Leitura!
Ch 2 Chapter 2: Magic - jnnaoiffos11mthCommented
"Desgraçado!" "Ei, não fale palavrões, maldito!" "Porra, vai pro inferno!" "Já falei para não falar palavrões arrombado do caralho!" iihiahiahiahahahahaihhiahihaihiahai
"Mind your bloody language, boy." Duncan, Magnus noted, was a living paradox the likes of which only Scotland could produce. He liked him nonetheless. The old man was kind, entertaining and honest to the bone.