This magus world fanfic is really great, at first when the author started writing this fanfic, there were many parts that were a problem. But all of them have been edited by the author. The story is good and it seems that the author has already thought of the future events in great detail. Looking forward to future chaps. Keep it up.

This one is better than most other DS fanfics, this dosen't mean that its flawless, but still a good read. The author is quite creative at times. But overall, it's great by fan-fic standards.