Do you use chatgbt for your fight scenes, I’ve used it enough to where I can recognize it pretty easily and it definitely reads like it. I can tell you don’t use it for everything but you should definitely only use it for inspiration and not the whole fighting scene because it feels nothing your writing style and is frankly shit.

The fact that the author uses chatgbt to write a good chunk of the novel is distasteful at best. Also, all the reviews that pointed that out are removed… please don’t make it so WebNovel becomes filled with low effort novels because it’s more profitable

Ya I was really sorta liking the novel all until chapter 40. Like it’s pretty obviously ChatGbt from that point forward, the actual interactions just get so brief and the Ai makes it pretty stale. I’m not gonna read anymore, though I will say the first 40 chapters were great. Too bad the author got lazy I guess.

I always see these novels with their stupid long titles and right them off as bad before even trying them but after reading the first couple chapters, I’ve got to admit that the story reads well and is actually semi interesting despite it being completely outside of my realm of usual interest for novels. This experience has definitely opened my eyes to check out some of these novels I would normally right off without reading. I wish the author would right something darker though cause I would definitely read, they have great writing style so far.

Question for the author, are you English speaking and do you write raw in English or is it translated? Your reviews read very well but the actual synopsis and the novel read very poorly like a swiftly done translation, I admire your dedication and creativity regardless.

I don’t have much to say about the story or the character development, but I’m in the second chapter and the grammar is awful. It’s not excusable, the novel already has decent numbers chapter wise. I’d recommend the author either get a competent editor to fix the ass grammar or does it themselves. I don’t even care about run off sentences or just crappy formatting but using incorrect word formats like saying (runs instead of running) is super fucking annoying to read around and makes a miserable experience. There’s also cases of totally opposite phrasing like (take care of till I live) -so he isn’t alive yet? Instead of (take care of till I die). I don’t see how the author can be proud of his work if he can’t even fix the first few chapters for obvious grammar issues. Doesn’t make me want to read anything else from this author. Overall I can’t hate on the author’s creativity but doesn’t mean much if you can’t communicate it.

The novels pretty great, but sometimes the author sometimes writes really stupid plot points that make me cringe. Like there was this french fries bs in the start about the town being shocked and bidding for the rights to french fries and kechup, another criticism would be how the protaginists grudge against people from his past falls flat and feels really stale. Theres also the cliche convient for conveniences sake bs around ch161. Ignoring all its falts i found myself emotionally invested with the protaganist and he faces a lot of stuggles that dont feel forced and i dont feel like im being hand held through the plot which is neat. I really enjoy the novel which makes me painfully aware that the author will probably go on hiatus eventually. keep writing, your stuffs fun and interesting, 👍