DaoKing

I've been reading this for a while now trying to withhold judgement until there's enough material to judge, but with the last chapter and the author asking for some comments I'll give some thoughts. This story is extremely good. It's a shame that it hasn't taken off already. It's been light on the action so far, but the magic feels absolutely crazy. I dont think I've ever read such a well thought out magical system and the world seems so in-depth it borders on perverse. If ATriste sticks with this story it will take off eventually, you hear me author? STICK WITH THIS ITS FANTASTIC!

Story has a lot of potential and It seems to be well written. 6 chapters in and I've yet to see any faceslapping, so we're off to a good start already. Hopefully the author updates frequently I want to see how things develop.