Librarian_Heroen

Wow, amazing!

Cause NunuXD is lazy, he probably will not crate good conflict and mc is gonna have a smooth path. And… the author will drop it soon, he has done it a lot of times, he can not continue something or just doesn’t want, he takes a premisse that everyone wants to read and use that to make money for a time then, quit. Sorry for the English, and I just wale up, so, you know, don’t judge!

I think it is enough, like, you didn’t even develop the begging of you story, just skip the training and show his abilities with the story progression. Use the chapters to develop the plot, because the idea is good, but the execution, not that much. Readers are going to give up if this continue.

Yeah, but it is anime logic, maybe there are meridians in this world and he could circulate blood through them with some special technique, I don’t know, I just said what was the equivalent of the 8 gates in the real world.

Eh, not that I know, but he come from a martial arts world, doesn’t he?

Forget it, I just read… Shit!

They are called 8 extraordinary meridians in the chinese medicine.

I don’t think Hinata has fellings for him here.

Yeah, he just mentions it once in a while.

Author knows nothing about swordsmanship and fights.