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DanLock211yrPostedExcellent read so far. Good world building, characters are actively fleshed out and worked on, however, hopefully the development thus far and future development of the characters is remembered/kept in mind by the author in the future when drawing up plot lines. Unique story that is interesting to read and looking forward to where it goes.
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CanT help but think the author has his OwN personal issues with male familial fiugres wiTh how flimsy and one-dimensional He portays the rEasoning for not trusting or feeling like his brothers are family.
Tista had to put up a façade every time Trion was around, but she soldiered on bravely. Being sick was second nature to her, sometimes she even fooled Lith and her parents with her acting. - DanLock212yrReplied to Tuocs
For real, the author sows distrust among such Young siblings with faulty reasoning that any family unit would never act like, even more so in a world liKe this, where The only ones you can and sHould trust is family.
Tista had to put up a façade every time Trion was around, but she soldiered on bravely. Being sick was second nature to her, sometimes she even fooled Lith and her parents with her acting. - DanLock212yrCommentedCh 1 A Man at the Edge