Ryuuoujin
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Ryuuoujin13dCommented"Would" fit better here given the context .
"Oh, I see... So, these are the credits I won from betting with that jealous girl last night~! Hahahaha~! Thank you very much, Instructor Lan~! You are really the best~! I thought she should pretend to forget about it!" Tang Li Xue joyfully stated to Instructor Mei Lan.- Ryuuoujin15dCommented
*a tall —> at all
She was overly excited about something that was most likely not going to affect their village a tall… But hey, I do like the enthusiasm she's putting. - Ryuuoujin18dCommented
Here —> where
"Zephyrus is also advancing steadily; he doesn't want to lose to his sister." Giggled Faylen. "His Unique Soul and his Aura are still a mystery to me… I don't know here all this power comes from, but we have to continue teaching him to control it properly, so it doesn't eventually consume him instead." - Ryuuoujin20dCommented
Boy? Shouldn’t it be body…
I spun my body into midair, both slashing weapons, unleashing a tremendous, spiraling gray slash that destroyed Blednica's spears imbued with The Bleeding Scream's {Presence} and then clashing into her boy, cutting her down into thousands of tiny pieces! - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
Shouldn’t there be be the word heart after beating? Or did you leav it that way on purpose
Ye Zhen let one of his black ghosts carry Rongrong's body as Ye Zhen himself pasted several black talismans onto Rongrong's beating while reciting some kind of mysterious mantra from his [Death Revelation Sutra]. - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
*her
Then Rongrong took a mouse from his beast storage bag and let the mouse track Tang Li Xue by using Gu Shengxin's blood as the medium. - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
*to
"Shut up…" Furoh sighed. "Oh, I guess my shapeshifting abilities are also very different compare dot Ninhursag, for example…" - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
Wrong series
"Phew! I really wanted to take one of these… Magic is sure convenient! We can make up a nice hot spring anywhere." Nepheline sighed in relief, my mother-in-law's body was more beautiful than I imagined, she was so well toned! Will Kireina get like this in the future too? I hope so! - Ryuuoujin1mthReplied to Kurai_Takahashi
Has this abandoned?
This book has been deleted. - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
*into -> unto
"W-What is that?! A Soul Eating Urn?! H-How did you get your hands into a relic of the Egyptian Gods?!" Hel screamed in horror, immediately attempting to flee! - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
*happened
"What haopened after that?!" Hermes asked him desperately. "What did they do to you?" - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
*magic
[The Runes that slowly form will give birth to new spells as they assemble within your Maic Circle, or to higher Tiered Spells.] - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
*to
[Your Soul Aether Stat has increased from SS+++ o SSS Rank!] - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Our? Not your?
[You have activated several skills, spells, and abilities and combined them together alongside Hundreds of Lesser Dragon Spirits, Holy Light Spirits, and our tamed Dragon Spirits!] - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Give? Shouldn’t it be take?
"I won't let you give a single step forward, bastards!" Elbedo roared, tearing and clawing his way through the fire monsters. - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Are sure you to meant to write "I had no flaws", instead of "It had no flaws", just wondering?
"Tsk…" The old man right in front of the black crystal clicked his tongue in frustration. "Everything is going downhill; nothing is working as intended! This was a perfect plan, to trap all of you bastards separately and kill you one by one! Our men were strong, all of them S Rank! Yet… yet you even managed to get right in front of me?! Bullshit… This is impossible! This plan was devised by me and approved by lord Maleficus! I had no FLAWS!" - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Missing words?
"For now, just store them inside your inventory! They can be easily handled with a barrier of spirit magic." I explained my party. - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Who’s mother?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Both? Why is there a "both" there?
Luckily, Tang Li Xue's perfect copy finally had another chance to get closer to Zhu Yan because both Gu Shengxin had to busily arrange maids and servants to prepare another unoccupied courtyard for Rongrong to stay.