Thanks for reading, I'll be posting the new chapter in around a week. 4/5k words.

I admire you sir. I can barely fit in the time...

How do you have time to write all this?

He's an original character. However, there could be some reincarnation type thing when I finish the prologue.

Any criticism?

Thanks for the chapter, the writing is a bit off though.

She -> so

More about the way the story begins and the slight lack of sense in how it unfolds.

I never even thought of that, thank you sir.

Don't worry too much, this is suggestions not selections. Its more of a way to get my head to spark something fun, sadly everyone seems to be picking the same things.

If you liked another fic, search for it on scr1bbl3-hub. Webnovel sucks at writing stuff that needs more than just basic text. Just because it's gone here doesn't mean I deleted hours and hours of my time and effort. I even said it was going to be deleted after 10 chapters because the main is on scribble. With that said, I really like this one so I'll probably just improve it when it looks bad.

Future chapters should clear this up though.

Not "kill each other." *One of us will kill the other. She knows she has a certain advantage too ; ). Referring to her childhood, I wouldn't place it on just "bad environment" either. There's a reason her decision making is flawed in how the child sees his parents.

It was worse before the improvement. What do you think makes her dumb?

How did you notice so quickly? And, as the person who wrote it. No, it is not decent, it is subpar at best. Makes me cringe when I read it. Don't want anything to do with it. Good to know you liked it though.

Maybe 👀

Thanks bud, I'll start again by the end of this semester and it should be very interesting.

That was fast.

no.