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Would love it as well and if he is also a love intrest. i don't think any one is more suited except for rimuru,Chloe,Trainey Dryad, Valentine,Violet and Frey the harpy queen. Even the leopard and lamia ones from lord carrion were good. But its upto you.
The story is good so far. But remember that the MC is a person with reinhard's skill not the reinhard himself so try not to make him same. I mean he could have saved her but there is also the point that she didn't want to be saved. Also if you can,Try reading harem reborn on webnovel. If you can i would love if you write something like that. I loved how the Mc travels the world of trinity seven and then Undefeated bahammut but i regret that if was dropped. Hope you read it and try to write one like that would like if the MC goes to both the worlds shown in it if you write a new novel.
Update the book already. This is one of its kind even now i think many are waiting for this. It was slow but story is interesting with just the right amount of spice the keep us hooked.
instead of this can you check another one i don't remember the name but its good. The first MC visit is trinity seven and then after that he visits the undefeated bahammut. I think its called harem reborn. Or maybe that other one where MC reincarnates into the sadou mao from the devil is a part timer and is given powers from trinity seven
The story is good just let him eat someone else body after all the great sage just want a reference to create one for him doesn't have to be shizue.
Chronos: Ruler of time and space. (Would love if its like spirit of kurumi) Anti magic: Full mastery of anti magic Miracle: In case of danger small chance to turn the tide in his favor. Demon eyes: Eyes of thee great Anos voldigoad. (And one more from him if you can)...Ingal.
Here to hoping shizue can e saved. I mean he could create a new vessel for her soul just like how spirits are made or make her evolve . Even lifespan is easy to solve for him using magic. The plot is already changed when reinhard came in this world so why bother keeping it the same as the story. It would be good if you change it now rather than doing it later down the line when all our favourite characters are dead. And its better if he separates from them but shizue should go with him and they can visit them occasionally.
Can you include left 4 dead, RE and tekken as the new game
If it say she has to die. Then there are ways to prevent it. Like killing her or taking out her soul and making it posses someone. He can create another body for her in future or kill her by shock or something and then resurrect her by giving her CPR . So then technically she would be dead for some time and then be reborn and her fate should also be fulfilled in this way. And if MC can create pure balls of energy for mana then he can surely create a vessel for soul. Don't tell me he didn't learn it after what happened to his little brother and even knowing what will happen in the future.
Then what about the story it can't be the same i mean reinhard is in tensura world there is bound to be some changes like he fought blanc so i don't think there is a way for blanc to be rimuru's subordinate except for plot as i think her curiosity would be greater towards reinhard for being a true hero ( Just me thinking this other than this the story is good but hope you make changes and not be the same as the novel or anime at least change some major things like saving the ogre village before them being destroyed or something else like these that effect the plot.) Even if you don't do this it is fun to read until now.