I love the turn of events. So interesting. Continue uploading more chapters please.

I think that Myung-Dae is a Coreen name. Your choices of the names are always surprising. I remember in the first chapters you started naming a strange weapons I was obliged to google them to know what type of weapons are they. The turn of events was unexpected and I loved it.

Eric surprised me with his character. His physical appearance and behaviour are matched perfectly. I can even imagine him speaking.

Now I understand what you were trying to say when said magic and science. Very interesting chapter.

I have been waiting for this chapter to come out since the last one. I wanted to see what will happen next on the other side of the story. It is an important part but it seems that we will have one imposter after all this events. Nice chapter.

Finally the main events and they are more interesting than the past chapters. Nice turn of events! Good luck.

Here is my thoughts about the story now: Good development of the story: yes Interesting characters: yes Mystery: yes Nice world background: yes Events: yes but I am waiting for more I also think that White Gun will reappear in the future. Every character you describe will have a role in the future that's what I, personally, think

Nice chapter indeed I am waiting for the return of the main story.

It is my first time reading a novel in this site and I totally love it. It deserves a rating of 5 if the updates were stable but I gave it 4.8 which is pretty good I guess. I am waiting for new chapters and I may make a new rating depending on the development.