JackalVadim

Can someone explain why everyone wants Momonosuke dead? Is this some kind of Chinese joke? This guy is 8-10 years old and he's not even in the top 100 most annoying kids I've ever met.

Didn't Big Mom kill giants when she was a baby? How can a guy who is slightly stronger than a normal human fight her and not die in 1 second? Maybe I misunderstood the power levels in the fanfic?

If I'm not mistaken, the author has health problems, that's why it all ended so abruptly. In any case, the story is wonderful, thanks for your work, author!

Мне нравится история, жду продолжения

Автор, спасибо за работу, я следил за фанфиком с первых глав и рад видеть его конец)

Good

Great plot and lively characters! I will be glad to wait for your further works, author!

Incredible, friend, you are a genius!

Просто супер, прочитал с огромным удовольствием. Жду продолжения. Автор, больше вдохновения для тебя!

I have mixed feelings about your work. On the one hand, it is interesting to read even with the Chinese style of storytelling. On the other hand, there is a feeling that the chronology of events is confused, the islands are out of place, it is not clear what is happening with the statistics, the hero is unreasonably strong in some moments, the statistics become either big or small at some moments. (it turns out that the heroes say that they have become much stronger, but in fact they are either weaker or the same as they were), Shiki is in prison, then free, then back in prison, Aokiji, Kuzan and Akainu became admirals, then became admirals again, after which they became admirals again...